It's really nice to see someone make an actual "trance" song by definition. A nice melodic intro building up is what always defines the best trance. What turned me off most about this piece was the lack of a breakdown/buildup. The beginning was good with the build up of the song, but I expected some sort of breakdown during the middle of the song somewhere.
Overall the song is your usual melodic trance song. Not bad, but I hope my review gives you ideas for future pieces. Hope to hear more from you!
Well there is a breakdown, its just not your average pad breakdown. It's more of a melodic one. And the plan wasnt really to make a trance song by definition. Im trying to make art not a structured essay. You make it sound bland and borring. But you are right, if i would of noticed at the time, i should of probably gone with a more Traditional approach.
A good start.
Some things I notice..The intro makes the song seem like its going to build up, and around 00:26 I expected some kind of exploision into the main melody and beat but that never happened, so it was more of a tease than anything. I do like the melody, bass and the beat you have going on, but you should do some break down/build ups because that will really get people into the song. Once you do that I can see this song really going somewhere. Hope my review helps!
thanks as i said this is in progress
I agree with EssenceofTrance, I think the bass should be a little more powerful, it will keep the song more powerful, which I like. I also like the variation of the main melody, changing it up here and there, which makes the song interesting in my opinion. You got a nice song here, good work and keep it up! Hope to hear more from you. I do think the ending was a little to sudden though :P
I just fixed the bass, it has a bit more power to it now. =)
Thanks for the review man.
I actually think this isn't a bad song. Very catchy, and you did a nice work with the beat, transitions, and the FX sounds. Good work, keep it up!
Def, better then your old stuff..now make a song! :P
I'm in The Pitt right now. This project is now lost to me. So is any other. I don't have the files anymore. I think this is the third time I lost all my shit. Oh well. New stuff will come when I get the chance.
I suggest finding a louder/pulsating beat. I have FL also, and all the beats on there suck. Google Vengeance, for some good beats, although you have to make an investment for that. Other then the beat, it wasn't a bad song. Keep it up.
As for the beat it was fine..As for the vocals...Not impressed. As the guy below me said, this is like another version of Lil' Wayne. Some of the words when the girl came in, didn't really match..The Lyrics weren't that great either. Newgrounds #1 rapper?? Don't think so.
Your not very well informed are you? Lmfao you wouldnt know a good lyric even if it hit u in the face and knocked you the fuck out u stupid techno jammin krakker. Watch your racist ass when you talk about my artists you stupid misfit. Learn your place you white trash.
Use your original sounds..the first sound I hear is from FL..where they have those sequences..That's not original. The beat was alright though.
Beat is too weak for a techno song..Plus this sounds more like a video game then anything lol. Most of the song seemed random, plus with all the voices, didn't really do anything with the song.. For example the "whats this knob do?" Usually you want to say that when you are actually going to do something with the knob lol. What you did was just reverse a crash and thats pretty much it, which isn't doing anything to a knob.
Overall the song could use a lot of work. The transitions were terrible, and the infectious was just getting annoying after the second time around. Sorry, but there is a lot of work that there needs to be done for a hit song. Unfortunately this isn't one of those songs that blow my mind.
Hopefully this review helped your friend.
Thats exactly was i told him, but he wont believe me ;) Nice that he can read this post of yours.
Well not bad for a remix..But its too generic..I could see this in a million other songs although its a remix, it just seems boring because of that fact. And its just that same melody the whole song..Which gets boring also. Keep up the work though.
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